editing part 2

Today we decided to add the sound and also edit some of the bits that we did not finish .

Veronika and me looked at what was not good and she changed it into something that was better. We  needed to change the colours and make them brighter because the clips still do not look bright enough , so Veronika changed them and made them brighter , she also experimented some other bits of the editor to find something that may be useful for us.

this is one example of how she changed the colours of the shot into something brighter.
 We done it because this will bring more positive effects to the audience.

this is a picture of a cross-dissolve effect that we decided to use to transmit a faster effect that flows and shows many shots in a shorter time. 

My part was the sound , while Veronika was editing , I was making a sound that will go with the scenes. I used Logic pro to create this.
When I showed the sound to veronika she liked it so we gave it a try , I added the sound to premier pro and we added it with the clips. We liked it but we still need to make some improvements for example when we want to cut the sound I would not like as a audience to cut it straight away when the scene is changing , is much better if I disolve it somehow or I make it from louder to more quite so we don't cut it straight away. I also want to add that I am looking for a sound that will go with the first scene of the opening scene which has to be very dramatic.