This is our preliminary task , I think we have to improve many things as for example the sound that was not the correct one for the preliminary.
But now that we see the mistakes is much easier to work out and improve.
What didn't work about the sound? How might you improve upon it for the main task?
You have some good shot variety at some points and match-on-action. The continuity works well and I like how the music acts as kind of an ironic undertone for the argument. Try to maintain the same camera angles in the shot-reverse shots, so the framing and continuity are maintained in both shots. Also, try not to have shots that go on for too long without anything exciting happening (like the shot where she is walking in the Hub). A good start for you preliminary!
Perhaps you could write a more detailed analysis of this short film highlighting what worked well and what you plan to develop. This will help you when you write your final evaluation.
What didn't work about the sound? How might you improve upon it for the main task?
ReplyDeleteYou have some good shot variety at some points and match-on-action. The continuity works well and I like how the music acts as kind of an ironic undertone for the argument.
Try to maintain the same camera angles in the shot-reverse shots, so the framing and continuity are maintained in both shots. Also, try not to have shots that go on for too long without anything exciting happening (like the shot where she is walking in the Hub). A good start for you preliminary!
We actually realised that after we finished , we know for the next time :)
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Perhaps you could write a more detailed analysis of this short film highlighting what worked well and what you plan to develop. This will help you when you write your final evaluation.
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